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The circles under my eyes grow darker and deeper as I breathe
My body grows weaker as I eat and sleep
I grow worse as I try to improve
My bones ache a full- yet- horribly hollow ache as I remain.
i feel like shit
i don't know anymore 
i really just...don't. 
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014   Writer
A potent rendering. Very expressive.

Regards,
John.
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading. :heart:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014   Writer
Any time. :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm sorry. If you need a shoulder to cry on, I'm right here. :hug:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I might need something to punch. 
I'm not to the crying stage yet. xD 
But thanks. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Try a pillow.
And you're welcome :hug:
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:iconieatrosepetals:
ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've been too tired to actually punch anything so it's fine.
:huggle:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I guess a good night of sleep would help :)
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I get 7-8 hours of sleep per night now. 
Getting enough sleep has nothing to do with it.
I'm going to a doctor soon, though. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I hope it's nothing serious.
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
-shrugs- if it is then it is. 
if it isn't then it isn't. 
I figure I'll deal with whatever it is when I find out. 
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Grangerbookworm Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
*cuddles tight: you'll be okay, bug. I'm sure of it
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
At least you are then. 
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:icongrangerbookworm:
Grangerbookworm Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
The glass is always half-full, babe
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So I realize. 
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