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If I should burn
Would you hold my hand until it went up in flames?
If I should freeze
Would you sit by me until the tips of my fingers were colored purple?
If I should die
Would you think about me until my last breath is forced past my unwilling lips?
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If I should live
Will you stay by my side to remind me?
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Would You Remember Me? by ieatrosepetals

/ / / ©2014-2015 ieatrosepetals
inspired by "I see fire" by Ed Sheeran from The Hobbit: Desolation of Smaug. 
for some reason i can't stop crying today. 
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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, don't be sad. This is a beautiful poem, and I'm only a note away.
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aw thank you, sweet one. :heart: 
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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hug 
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imaginative-lioness Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:clap: I absolutely love it when poems ask questions like this. You can really, really feel the emotion throughout the entire piece. It just has so much impact, so much power. I think this is very well written! :heart:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my goodness. Blush 
Thank you so much for reading and commenting with such kind words~ :heart: 
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello :wave:
You have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day! :dalove:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my goodness gracious- thank you so much! :heart: 
i hope you have a good day too! 
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, thank you! :heart:
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Grangerbookworm Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I'll be with you always
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:iconieatrosepetals:
ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh sweetie :heart: and I with you! 
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Grangerbookworm Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
^_^ Warning- I can break fingers when I get really excited :p
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:iconieatrosepetals:
ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll have metal gloves. xD
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:icongrangerbookworm:
Grangerbookworm Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Mediaval ones shall be provided for you XD
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!!! 
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:icongrangerbookworm:
Grangerbookworm Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You'll need them xD
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awww hey no crying talk to me :iconbackhug: and this is sad but beautiful but sad
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i'll talk to you about it sometime tomorrow probably. 
and thank you. 
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is quite a sad poem with a heartbreaking conclusion. I would remember you. :)
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Unfortunately I've been feeling sad lately..
Thank you. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
:huggle: I love the feelings here. So deep and intense
And yes, I would :)
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You should listen to the song that inspired it. 
&& thank you. 
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I will. And you're welcome :)
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