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When you return
Do you think you could take some of your precious-not-to-be-wasted-time to say hello?

When you left
It was almost literally without-a-trace
And you left a note; one of those shitty little notes
“Don’t worry about me I’ll be fine” with “but most importantly you’ll be fine without me”
Written in-between each individual letter of your goddamned words.
i just.. am done. 
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
I can say "Hello". But what would that mean?... :( It wouldn't make up for other people's mistakes...
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello! :heart: 
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw you seem so sad these last days my dear. :(
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Things have not been so good lately.. But I'll be okay! 
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww you need to talk?
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There isn't much to say about it really, just that things aren't well. 
But thank you. :heart:
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh okay, don't forget I'm here if you need to talk. :)
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, dear one. :heart:
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing. I just had the urge to read this, it is beautiful. I myself have written on the topic like... just recently but this is a lot more powerful. I am not marketing when I am posting a link of my work, but I think you might find it an interesting comparison :) notensmsk.deviantart.com/art/N… . The way you have ended it, is amazing. I really liked this!
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. 
I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :) 
Also your piece is powerful as well, don't belittle yourself in comparison to someone else. :heart: 
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for saying so and you are very welcome :)

I guess that works shouldn't be compared but the theme felt too similar in a way :heart: Thank you for reading it.
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're most welcome! 
I'm in the process of going through your gallery while trying to finish up some online homework xD 
Also trying very hard to comment. 
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) Aha thank you for browsing through :huggle: I would love to do the same on your works :)

And why do you have to try hard to comment Just wondering :)
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I suppose I'm slightly afraid of sharing my opinion on someone else's work. 
Like if they take it the wrong way I do not wish for them to be angry or offended. 
I also most times... I feel the work- the emotion pours out of it and I receive it in such a way that leaves me weeping and speechless. 
I feel like words often cannot describe the emotion/love/admiration I have for a piece of work and thus I just.. sit and favorite it and cry a little. 
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
awwww... ~hugs you~ I see. I understand about people getting angry. I do take risk at times and it doesn't always pay off well. And yes, at times works are too good. And when a person says "This was amazing" it doesn't fully state the impact the work had!

hmm... some work truly are so beautiful they make you want to cry :heart:
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ieatrosepetals Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle: 
I often cry when I read a particularly powerful piece of poetry. 
Luckily for me I have mastered the art of crying silently! 
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